Sunday, August 30, 2009

Chapter One - Part Three

"Stop talking and move back Gobalee!" Shouted the pale ogre.

"Get out of my way!" Returned his companion. Reith and Tyrel couldn't decide the species of the second creature; however, to them Gobalee looked part catfish, part cockroach.

Reith and Tyrel didn't have any trouble sidling up unnoticed behind the duo as Gobalee and his friend made enough noise to be a small elephant herd.

1 comment:

Karen Valinda said...

I like it but after waiting SO long it is unhappily short!!! (may I have some Brie to go with my whine?)
I think 'shouted' and 'returned' are usually lower case because the punctuation they follow is inside of parentheses and consequently doesn't apply to them.
more! more!
greedy follower ya got here, buddy...